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英语六级写作范文及点评:万能的美元

英语六级写作范文及点评:万能的美元

金钱要求你将自己的才智出售给他人的理智,而不是将你的缺点出售给他们的愚蠢。对待金钱要有正确的态度。也许金钱可以是你衡量自身能力的一种标准,却不是唯一的标准。 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Political and technological developments are rapidly obliterating all cultural differences and it is possible that, in a not remote future, it will be impossible to distinguish human beings living on one area of the earth’s surface from those living on any other①, but our different pasts have not yet been completely erased and cultural differences are still perceptible. The most striking difference between an American and a European is the difference in their attitudes towards money. Every European knows, as a matter of historical fact, that, in Europe, wealth could only be acquired at the expense of other human beings②, either by conquering them or by exploiting their labor in factories. Further, even after the Industrial Revolution began, the number of persons who could rise from poverty to wealth was small: the vast majority took it for granted that they should not be much richer nor poorer than their fathers. In consequence, no European associates wealth with personal merit or poverty with personal failure.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  In the United States, wealth was also acquired by stealing, but the real exploited victim was not a human being but poor Mother Earth and her creatures who were ruthlessly plundered. It is true that the Indians were expropriated, but this was not, as it had always been in Europe, a matter of the conqueror seizing the wealth of the conquered, for the Indian had never realized the potential riches of his country. It is also true that, in the Southern states, men lived on the labor of slaves, but slave labor did not make them fortunes; what made slavery in the South all the more inexcusable was that, in addition to being morally wicked, it didn’t even pay off handsomely.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  Thanks to the natural resources of the country, every American, until quite recently, could reasonably look forward to making more money than his father, so that, if he made less, the fault must be his; he was either lazy or inefficient. What an American values, therefore, is not the possession of money as such, but his power to make it as a proof of his manhood; once he has proved himself by making it, it has served its function and can be lost or given away. In no society in history have rich men given away so large a part of their fortunes. A poor American feels guilty at being poor, but less guilty than an American rentier who has inherited wealth but is doing nothing to increase it; what can the latter do but take to drink and psychoanalysis?yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  作者威斯特·休·奥登(Wystan Hugh Auden)(1907—1973),英国诗人,文学评论家,20世纪30年代英国左翼青年作家领袖,40年代起思想向右转变,后期诗歌带有浓厚宗教色彩,1946年入美国国籍。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  本文比较了欧洲人的金钱观和美国人的金钱观。文章第一段就指明美国人和欧洲人之间有文化差异,而最明显的在于他们对待金钱的不同态度。紧接着作者先阐述了欧洲人对待金钱的态度。在第二段和第三段中,作者具体介绍了美国人的金钱观,从而得出结论:欧洲人靠剥削别人致富,美国人靠掠夺自然资源致富;欧洲人抓住金钱不放,美国人认为最重要的不是金钱本身而是赚钱的能力。本文又是一篇很好的comparison and contrast结构的范文。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  好文妙译 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  万能的美元yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  政治与科技的发展正迅速消除一切文化差异,在不久的将来,人们有可能没办法把地球上一个地区的人与居住在另一个地区的人区分开来,但我们不同的过去还没有完全被抹灭,文化的差异依然清晰可见。美国人与欧洲人之间最明显的不同在于他们对待金钱的态度不同。每个欧洲人都知道(其实这也是历史事实):在欧洲要获得财富只能牺牲别人,不论是通过征服他们,还是通过在工厂里剥削他们的劳动。此外,即使工业革命开始后,能由穷变富的人仍是少数:绝大多数人认为他们不会比自己上一代富太多或穷太多是理所当然的事。因此,没有欧洲人会把财富与个人成就,或者把贫穷与个人失败联系在一起。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  在美国,财富也是偷盗而来,但那个真正受剥削的牺牲品不是人,而是被残酷掠夺的的可怜的大地母亲和她的生物。印第安人确实被剥夺了土地,但这并不像在欧洲那样征服者掠夺被征服者的财富,因为印第安人从来没有意识到他们国土上潜在的财富。在南方各州,也的确有人靠奴隶的劳动生活,但奴隶劳力并没有使他们发大财;南方奴隶制尤其不可原谅之处,除了它道德上极恶劣外,还在于它甚至不能慷慨地让南方人赚一大笔钱。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  由于美国自然资源很丰富,直到最近,每个美国人都有理由指望赚得比他父亲多,所以如果他赚得比他父亲少了,一定是他的错;不是他太懒,就是他不能干。因此,美国人看重的不是有钱这件事本身,而是他借以证明其男子汉气概的赚钱能力;一旦他赚到了钱证明了自己,钱就达到了它的功用,此时或失去或赠人都无所谓了。历史上没有一个社会的富人会把那么一大笔财富送掉。一个贫穷的美国人会因为穷而感到惭愧,但他的羞愧之情还不及一个继承了一笔财富却没办法使其增值的美国人;后者除了酗酒,看心理医生之外还能怎么办呢?yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  词汇斟酌 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  almighty a. 全能的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  obliterate vt. 涂去, 删除, 使湮没yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  remote a. 遥远的, 偏僻的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  perceptible a. 可察觉的, 显而易见的, 感觉得到的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  ruthlessly ad. 冷酷地, 残忍地yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  plunder v. 抢劫;偷盗;掠夺…的财物yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  expropriate v. 没收;征用;夺取所有权yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  wicked a.坏的, 邪恶的, 缺德的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  handsomely ad. 慷慨地yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  rentier n. 靠利息及地租等生活的人yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  psychoanalysis n. 精神分析;心理分析yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  佳句临摹 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  ①【注释】distinguish...from... 区别,辨别yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  【临摹】The twins are so alike that no one can distinguish one from the other.这对双胞胎长的很像,没人能分清谁是谁。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  ②【注释】at the expense of sth 在损失或损坏某事物的情况下yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  【临摹】He built up a successful business but it was all done at the expense of his health.他创建了一个成功的企业,却牺牲了自己的健康。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  思如泉涌yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  Money is the key that opens all doors. 金钱是打开一切门户的钥匙。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  A light purse is a heavy curse. 为人无钱处处难。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè

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回复:英语六级写作范文及点评:万能的美元

六级写作经典范文及点评:欲望  yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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    欲望与生俱来,人人都有。它可以催人上进,使人奋起,创造事业辉煌;也可以使人得陇望蜀,永不满足,最终陷于痛苦。如何看待,如何运用,不同人的心中有一杆不同的秤…Appetite yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  One of the major pleasures in life is appetite, and one of our major duties should be to preserve it. Appetite is the keenness of living: it is one of the senses that tells you that you are still curious to exist, that you still have an edge on your longings and want to bite into the world and taste its numerous flavors and juices. By appetite, of course, I don’t mean just the desire for food, but any condition of unsatisfied desire, any burning in the blood that proves you want more than you’ve got, and that you haven’t used up your life. Wilde said he felt sorry for those who never got their heart’s desire, but sorrier still for those who did. For appetite, for me, is this state of wanting, which keeps one’s expectations alive.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  I remember learning this lesson long ago as a child, when treats and indulgence were few, and when I discovered that the greatest pitch happiness was not in actually eating a toffee but in gazing at it beforehand. True, the first bite was delicious, but once the toffee was gone one was left with nothing, neither toffee nor lust. Besides, the whole toffeeness of toffees was imperceptibly diminished by the gross act of having eating it. No, the best was in wanting it, in sitting and looking at it, when one tasted an endless treasure house of flavors. So, for me, one of the keenest pleasures of appetite remains in the wanting, not the satisfaction. In wanting a peach, or a whisky, or a particular texture or sound, or to be with a particular friend, for in those condition, of course, I know that the object of desire is always at its most flawlessly perfect. For that matter, I don’t want three square meals a day — I want one huge, delicious, orgiastic, table groaning blow out, say every four days, and then not be too sure where the next one is coming from①. A day of fasting is not for me just a device for denying oneself a pleasure, but rather a way of anticipating a rarer moment of supreme enjoyment.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  [360 words]yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  作者开篇点题,指出One of the major pleasures in life is appetite。进而作者给appetite下了一个定义,即对任何事物的渴望。接着用王尔德的话引出作者的观点: Appetite is the state of wanting。在第二段中,作者用I remember...讲述了自己吃太妃糖的亲身经历,描述生动形象,贴近生活,由这段经历作者引出了文章的主题——欲望最大的乐趣在于对之渴求,而非满足。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  作者谈的是食欲(appetite),却又不仅仅谈对食物的热望。作者由小见大,由食欲谈及欲望(desire),及其满足(satisfaction)。文章充满智慧(wits),是一篇上佳的小品文。读者应能够体会作者刻意营造的一种轻灵跳跃(staccato)之感:No, the best was in wanting it, in sitting and looking at it(不,最重要的是对它的渴望和坐下来盯着它看的感觉)。这句话充分体现了作者有极高的驾驭语言的能力。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  好文妙译 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  欲望yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  生活中一项最大的乐趣便是有个好胃口,而我们的主要职责之一便是保持这一好胃口。胃口是对生活的一种强烈的愿望,这是一种感觉,它告诉你你仍渴望着,你还有许多渴望尚待实现,还想继续生活在这世界上,品尝各种风味。所谓胃口(欲望),当然,我不仅仅指对食物的热望,而且指任何未满足的渴望的情形,任何血液的沸腾都证明了你要的不仅仅是这些,你还未好好享受人生。王尔德说他对那些从未得到满足的人表示遗憾,但对那些已经心满意足的人更感到悲哀。欲望对我来说,是一种渴求的状态,它使希望永存。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  我记得懂得这一点是在很久以前,还是个孩子的时候,那时有人款待和纵酒享乐的机会很少。而我发觉最大的幸福不在于吃太妃糖,而在于吃前凝视它的那一段时间。诚然,咬第一口时味道不错,但一旦太妃糖吃完了,一切皆化为乌有,无论是太妃糖还是欲望全都没了。此外,太妃糖的味道也在大口咀嚼中毫无觉察地消失了。不,最棒的是对它的渴望和坐下来盯着它看时的感觉,仿佛置身于美食宝库遍尝天下美味佳肴时才有的感觉。所以对我而言,欲望的最大乐趣之一在于对之渴求,而非满足感。想吃一个桃子,或喝一杯威士忌,或是期待一个特别的质感或声音,又或是渴望能和一个特别的朋友在一起,在这些情况下,我当然知道欲望的目的通常在于其无瑕疵的完美。对此,我不想过一天三顿的正常生活,而想每四天来一顿丰富可口的美味佳肴,大吃大喝一顿,接下来不知下一顿从何而来。一天的禁食对我来说并非像是被剥夺了快乐,而是期待更多纵情享乐的时刻。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  词汇斟酌 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  appetite n.①胃口,食欲②欲望yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  keenness n.渴望yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  numerous a.众多的,许多的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  flavor n.①味,滋味,味道②特色,风味yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  indulgencen.放任yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  pitchn.程度,强度yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  beforehandad.预先,事先yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  lustn.渴望,欲望vi.(after, for)对…有强烈的欲望yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  imperceptibly ad.察觉不到地, 微细地yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  diminish vi.变少,变小,降低vt.减少,减小,降低yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  orgiastic  a.狂欢的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  groan vi.①呻吟,抱怨②发出呻吟的声音yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  fast v.禁食,斋戒yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  device n.手段,策略yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  supremea.①最高的,至上的②极度的,最重要的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  佳句临摹 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  ①【注释】blow out 减弱;停止;熄灭yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  【临摹】Somebody opened the door and the candle blew out.有人打开了门,蜡烛随之被吹灭了。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  思如泉涌yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  A sound mind is in a sound body. 健全的精神寓于健康的身体中。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  All progress is based upon a universal innate desire on the part of every organism to live beyond its income. 世人莫不怀着一种与生俱来的欲望,要把支出超过收入,此乃一切进步的动力。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè

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回复:英语六级写作范文及点评:万能的美元

六级写作经典范文及点评:睡姿与性格  yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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    人说,性格决定命运。怎样才能了解自己的性格呢?本文就教给你一个自测方法。入睡后,你的睡姿便会无意识地暴露你真实的个性。认识一下你自己吧! yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  Your Sleeping Position and Your PersonalityyâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Everyone has got two personalities — the one that is shown to the world and the other that is secret and real.You don’t show your secret personality when you’re awake because you can control your behavior, but when you’re asleep, your sleeping position shows the real you. In a normal night, of course, people frequently change their position. The important position is the one that you go to sleep in.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  If you go to sleep on your back, you’re a very open person. You normally trust people and you are easily influenced by fashion or new ideas. You don’t like to upset people, so you never express your real feelings. You’re quite shy and you aren’t very confident.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  If you sleep on your stomach, you are a rather secretive person. You worry a lot and you’re always easily upset. You’re very stubborn, but you aren’t very ambitious. You usually live for today but not tomorrow. This means that you enjoy having a good time.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  If you sleep curled up, you are probably a very nervous person. You have a low opinion of yourself and so You’re often defensive. You’re shy and you don’t normally like meeting people. You prefer to be on your own. You’re easily hurt.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  If you sleep on your side, you have usually got a well-balanced personality. You know your strengths and weaknesses. You’re usually careful. You have a confident personality. You sometimes feel anxious, but you don’t often get depressed. You always say what you think even if it annoys people①.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  [300 words]yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  本文为总分结构,第一段提出观点:睡姿显示个性, 作者在首句提出Everyone has got two personalities,并指出在一个人熟睡时,睡姿会显示出他真实的一面。进而作者在后面四段分别从四种不同的睡姿来阐释人的个性,我们从中可以学到谈论一个人性格时的几种常见表达:open(心胸开阔),secretive(遮遮掩掩),nervous(易紧张),balanced personality(性格平和)。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  全文句型简单,读起来琅琅上口,十分适合于背诵。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  好文妙译 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  睡姿与性格yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  每个人都有双重性格——一种是展示于外的性格,另一种是隐藏于内的真实性格。在你醒着的时候,你不会表现你隐藏的个性,因为你能控制你的行为,但在熟睡时,你的睡姿会显示你真实的一面。当然,通常人们在夜里会频繁改变睡姿。最重要的姿势是你入睡的姿势。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  如果你仰卧而睡,那么你是一个心胸开阔的人。一般你相信他人,易受流行时尚和新观念的影响。你不喜欢使别人感到沮丧,所以你从不说出你真实的感受。你很害羞且不太自信。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  如果你俯卧而睡,则你喜爱遮遮掩掩。你心事重重,且容易沮丧。你很固执却没有野心。通常你为今天而不为明天而生活。这意味着你享受生活。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  如果你蜷缩着身体而睡,则你很可能是个容易紧张的人。你的自我感觉不好,因此自我保护意识强。你很害羞,通常不喜欢与人交往。你倾向于依赖自己且容易受到伤害。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  如果你侧卧而睡,则你性格平和。你知道自己的优点和缺点。一般而言,你小心谨慎且十分自信。有时你也会感到焦虑,但不会情绪低落。即使你的观点会激怒别人,你也会将它表达出来。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  词汇斟酌 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  stubborn a.①顽固的,执拗的,倔强的②难对付的,难于克服的 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  curl up ①卷起,撅起(嘴唇等)②(使)蜷起yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  defensive a.防御用的, 自卫的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  annoy vt.①使恼怒,使烦恼②打扰,干扰yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  佳句临摹 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  ①【解析】even if 即使;纵然;尽管yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  【临摹】Even if I had to walk there all the way, I’ll get there.即使我得一路走着去,我也要走到那里。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  思如泉涌yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Only one’s mind is real. Strictly speaking, appearance is nothing but a mask. Real man is in himself.惟有人的心灵才是真实的。严格说来,相貌不过是一个面具。真相在人的内心深处。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  You may know by a handful the whole sack.由一斑可知全貌。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè

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回复:英语六级写作范文及点评:万能的美元

我们或许不能像伟人那样超凡脱俗,但可以时时借助幽默来使自己开心,使自己超脱尘世的种种烦恼。漫画就是这样的一种幽默形式。 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  Art and HumoryâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Millions of people struggle out of bed each morning, fumble into some clothes, and make their way to a cup of coffee and the morning newspaper①. They need something cheerful to remind them that the rest of the day will be less difficult than getting up. This need may be the reason that many of them turn their half-opened eyes to the comics section of the newspaper as they sip their first cups of coffee of the day.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Cartoons reflect the times and the troubles and worries of people. They give people an opportunity to laugh at themselves and at familiar situations. For example, a cartoon might say that the government of a country is responsible for the bad economy and also show the government leaders as a group of ridiculous people. Being able to use the leaders as scapegoats and to laugh at the leaders somehow makes people feel better about their situation.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Cartoons also make people laugh at their own personal worries. Young people who are not always sure of how to act can smile at their awkwardness. Old people whose grown children pay little attention to them can chuckle at their neglect and loneliness. Students who have studied too little before an examination can laugh at their anxiety. Everyone’s problems are made bigger–than–life in the comics. Perhaps the problems seem funny because there is humor in something that is real being made unreal.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  A cartoon combines art and humor. When it is skillfully done, a simple line drawing and a few words can make people laugh. Their troubles seem less important, and they enjoy life more fully.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  [276 words]yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  这篇文章结构比较清晰。第一段提出观点:漫画可以令人快乐,作者用了struggle out of bed, fumble into some clothes, 形象地展示了一个大多数读者都非常熟悉的生活场景。第二、三段从公众和个人的角度说明,漫画反映人们的时代和生活特点;每段的第一句话都是主题句(topic sentence),即每一段都在第一句提出这一段的分论点,再对其加以论证。第四段总结全文,点明文章的主题。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  文中排比句的运用,比如第三段中对不同类型人的笑的描述Young people … Old people … Students …,也值得读者在写作中借鉴。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  好文妙译 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  艺术与幽默yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  每天清晨,成千上万的人不情愿地起床,摸索着穿上衣服,然后喝咖啡,看早报。他们需要一些令人高兴的事情来提醒自己一天中剩余的时间将不会像起床那样难受。这就是为什么他们会在喝一天中的第一杯咖啡时将惺忪的睡眼投向报纸上的连环漫画专栏的原因。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  漫画反映一个时代,也反映人们的问题和烦恼。它给了人们一个自我解嘲的机会,让人们对他们熟悉的事情发笑。例如,某幅漫画会把经济不景气归咎于一个国家的政府,但也会把政府领导人画成一群可笑的人。把领导人当成替罪羊来加以嘲讽,在某种程度上这会让人们对自己的处境感觉好一点。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  漫画也使人们对个人烦恼付之一笑。年轻人不知所措时可以对困境微微一笑。被成年子女冷落的老人可以对自己被人遗忘、孤独的境地轻轻苦笑。而“平时不烧香,临时抱佛脚”的学生也可以对考试前的焦虑笑一笑。连环画把人们的问题夸张地表现出来。也许那些问题看上去很可笑,这是因为当真实的事物被夸大到不真实的程度时,本身就产生了幽默。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  漫画结合了艺术和幽默。巧妙地画几笔简单的线条,写几句简洁的话就能让人开怀大笑。人们的烦心事看上去不再那么重要了,而人们也能够更充分地享受生活。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  词汇斟酌 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  fumble v. 笨拙地做,摸索yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  comic n. 连环画页,连环漫画yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  sip v. 呷,啜yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  ridiculous a.荒谬的, 可笑的yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  scapegoat n.替罪羊yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  awkwardness n.笨拙, 不雅观yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  chuckle vi.吃吃的笑, 咯咯叫yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  佳句临摹 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  ①【解析】make one’s way (to/toward sth)向…前进yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  【临摹】I’ll make my way home now.我现在要回家了。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  思如泉涌yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  It is a great art to laugh at your own misfortune. 对己之不幸付之一笑,这是一门伟大的艺术。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Art lies in concealing art. 隐而不露即艺术。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè

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六级写作范文及点评:装饰品的重要性

现在许多年青人都认为流行的就是最好的,于是费尽心思地追求时尚,极力模仿明星们的穿着打扮。但作者告诉我们,着装要有自己的风格,几件小的配饰就能传递时尚的概念。The Importance of Accessories yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  Do you ever feel unfashionable?Have you ever wondered how to keep up with new trends?yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  If you answered yes, then don’t worry! Many people feel they have to dress a certain way.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Fashion is a reflection of your character. Don’t let other peoples’ opinions influence how you dress! It’s important not to feel forced into the fashion choices you make. You may not be able to carry off a new look if it doesn’t suit your character.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Fashion should be fun so don’t be afraid to try out new styles. If you don’t feel brave enough to try a whole new wardrobe, accessories are the answer! By changing only your accessories, you’ll be saving money and then you’ll be able to keep up with the newest trends.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Adding accessories such as a bag, a belt, a hat, a scarf or jewellery can really change your look. For example, a pair of jeans and a T-shirt can be made into several different outfits for different events.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Currently, the sporty look is very popular. You may want accessories with a baseball cap and sweatbands or by carrying a sports bag.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  To add some glamour, you could wear a silk scarf as a belt. You could also wear jewellery such as wire bracelets and some dangling earrings. These will transform your look into a glamorous gypsy style.yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  Whatever style you choose to follow, remember that fashion should be fun and most importantly it should be about you!yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  [249 words]yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  文章以两个问句开始,向读者发问,提到了现在很流行的一个话题:fashion。作者假设读者的回答是肯定的,从而在下一段引出作者自己的观点:穿衣要有自己的风格。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  在第三段中,作者先给时尚下了一个定义: Fashion is a reflection of your character。接着提出文章的主题:饰品可以帮你赶上潮流。进而作者提出了几个用饰品装扮时尚的例子,使得观点更加令人信服。文章结尾作者用Whatever引导的一个让步状语从句再一次重申:无论选择怎样的方式,潮流应该是适合自己的。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  好文妙译 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  装饰品的重要性yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
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  是否你也曾觉得自己很老土?是否你曾经想过怎样才能赶上潮流的步伐?yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  即使你的答案是肯定的,也不用担心!很多人都觉得他们自己必须有自己的着装方式。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  潮流是个性的反映。不要让别人的观点影响你的着装!不要觉得自己是被迫选择潮流,这是最重要的。如果和自己的个性不符,你根本就不会看起来焕然一新!yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  潮流应该是很有趣的,所以不要害怕尝试新款。如果你没有足够的勇气完全更新衣橱,装饰品就是你所需要的!仅换换装饰品,不但可以省钱,而且你也可以跟上最新潮流。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  像包、皮带、帽子、丝巾和珠宝这些装饰品真的可以让你看起来完全不同。例如,一条牛仔裤和一件T恤就可以有许多搭配以适应不同场合的需要。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  现在非常流行运动型装扮。或许你需要配个棒球帽、吸汗巾或者背个运动包。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  想看起来更加魅力十足,你可以把丝巾当成皮带用。你也可以戴些像手镯和晃晃荡荡的耳环之类的饰品。这些都会让你看起来就像迷人的吉普赛人。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  无论你选择怎样的方式,记住,潮流应该是很有趣的,最重要的是潮流应该适合你自己!yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  词汇斟酌 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  accessory n. 附件, 零件, 附加物yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  wardrobe n. 衣柜, 衣厨, 衣室yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  scarf n. 围巾, 头巾,领巾yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  outfit n. 配备yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  bracelet n. 手镯,臂镯yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  dangle vi. 悬摆,悬荡yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  glamorous a. 富有魅力的 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  gypsy n. 吉普赛人yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  佳句临摹 yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  ① 【解析】keep up with sth 跟上(形势)yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  【临摹】She likes to keep up with the latest fashions.她喜欢穿戴入时。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  思如泉涌yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  Cut your coat according to your cloth. 量体裁衣。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè
  Apparel makes the man. 人靠衣装马靠鞍。yâµÀ]ê{uforum.liuxuehome.com_à” T4ˆ~xè

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