英语六级备考技巧：高分考生谈如何大幅提高写作水平

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venkatmba 2008-08-17 22:57 | 只看楼主 树型| 收藏| 小中大 1 ^#

英语六级备考技巧：高分考生谈如何大幅提高写作水平

红色字是要替换掉的关键字（略）我分三部分写：开头、中间、结尾

首先是文章的开头，作文开头我认为是最好写的，只要把作文标题写上去就可以了，也最容易提高分值。

It goes without saying that the issue of piracy has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the college students have such experiences using piracy produce. In addition，the survey also shows that an increasing number of people are interested in piracy produce, and will join the army in the future.

这个是我依据六级作文“反盗版”写的，比如今年的六级作文，只要替换成“西方节日”的关键词就可以了。
比如“压力”讨论：
It goes without saying that the issue of stress has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the people have felt under stress. In addition, the survey also shows that an increasing number of people will join the army in the future.

我写了什么，我好像什么都没有写？！

中间段落有的要求是分析原因，有的要求是正反观点

对于分析原因，我总结了三个万能原因：经济发展、政策推动、法律制定，以不变应万变

What caused this remarkable phenomenon? Personally, there are at least three premier factors contributing to it. To begin with, the government has been forwarding the policy to support private houses programs. Furthermore, the increased income resulting from economic growth plays a cardinal part in the changes. Finally, the authorities concerned have made proper regulations to protect private houses.

这个是我依据六级作文“私有房产”改写的，这三个原因可以说在任何方面都是可以用的，再说了改卷的老师都是看你的句型和词汇用的如何，根本就不会注意你写的是什么内容，这个大家都应该是知道的。
比如今年的六级作文，你说“经济发展了所以大家才有钱去过西方节日”难道不可以么？我就是这么写的。

另一个是正反观点

When asked about their opinion of stress, people always response differently. The overwhelming majority of people deem that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the attitude that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose in life. On the contrary, there are other people who hold stress contributes to one's mental decline and hence endangers his health. In conformity to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body.

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这个我是依据朱泰祺老师的作文“压力”改写的，大家参考。

结尾有的要求是提出对策，有的要求是趋势分析

提出对策，原因找出来了要提出解决方案，我这里总结了三个万能措施：政府立法、提高意识、认识价值

In conclusion, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing phenomenon. To begin with, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Finally, we should bring home to people the value of protecting ocean resources. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future.

这一部分我是依据考研作文的那篇“鱼”改写的，大家可以参考。
大家想一想，有什么问题这三个措施不能解决的呢？还考虑什么，背吧！

结尾的另一个写法是趋势分析。
From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that the qualities of people's living have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction.
这个是我依据胡敏老师那篇“生活水平提高”改写的，大家参考。
这个写法同样可以适用于今年的六级写作，“以后过西方节日的人会越来越多，是一个趋势”。

以上就是我的作文总结，我写了什么，我好像什么都没有写？！但是对于一篇新的文章我确实能写好多，不是么，大家自己看吧。

这些基本上对于一般的议论文都是可以应付的，大家参考，祝所有的考生早日过关四六级！

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